Wednesday, September 28, 2011

What a novel

Everytime i sat on my studychair, sometimes i really studying, but sometimes i pretending to study. When i pretending to study, usually i wrote a comic or a novel. Aaannndd my novel it just sooo randomly .....weird. 


Im not a good painter, really -_-

 The title is "Valse L'adieu'' or "Farewell Waltz". Adopted from Frederic Chopin's piano song, Valse L'adieu.  
The story is about a 13 year old kid who has a piano talent but never show it to anyone including her parents. Her name is Akito Hiromasa. A daughter of Ryuichi Hiromasa, a rich businesman who always traveling around the world only for his job. And his wife, Carissa Dacio Odette Darell, a French busy lady who working under her husband who travels around the world, but not with her husband. So, Akito stays on Japan in her house and always lonely. She barely met her parents, even her sister, Hiromasa Eloise, who moved to Paris. Akito is very admire Frederic Chopin.


The story is began with Akito playing piano in her school, but didn't know that there's her teacher who heard her playing. Her teacher rushed to the piano room and sees Akito playing piano, and for the first time there's a person who knew that she could play piano. Akito being pushed into an Orchestra by her music teacher to play in PromNight party. But she seems so angry, because if her father know that she could play the piano and join the orchestra in her school, she will be moved to Paris, to continuing musical school there.


And then, finally, when her mother know that she could play piano well, she ask her to play for her party with her friends in her workplace. That's when Akito being introduced to a violinist named Keitaro Kenji, same with her, a Japanese-French boy who talented in music.


When her mother ask Akito to duet with Kenji, Akito refuse. Because she don't like Kenji's attitude. Same as Kenji. But when her mother and Kenji's mother is forcing them to play together, finally they agree and play Frederic Chopin's Nocturne and Pachelbel's Canon.


Not long after, her father knows that Akito could play piano. And finally transfering her to Paris even she didn't want to. But because her father's rudeness, she finally accept it even she is so sad for leaving Japan and her friends.

But she didn't know that Kenji come along with her. He go to Paris to school there too in the same school with Akito. And finally, their mother agree that they should be married to each other when they're grow up. Of course, they refuse it.

Not long after, Akito feels sick. She coughing everyday, and sometimes, with blood. She keeps it as a secret to everybody. But when she is in the practice room with Kenji, she coughing blood and finally she has to tell him what happened to her. Kenji promised that he wont tell anyone if she goes to the hospital.


When she examine it to the doctor, doctor told her that she had a tubercolosis virus. Just like Chopin. Akito, being down for days and telling it to Kenji. Since then, Kenji always there for her, and he realized that he fall for her and want to protect her forever, even she didn't love him back.


Akito stays strong in front of the other people, but, she now facing the fact that slowly her beloved people go away from this world. Her sister, Eloise, pass away in Paris right before her show in a ballroom. Eloise ask her to play Beethoven's Sonata Pathetique when the show goes on. But Akito refuse it and she still wanted to play Beethoven's Fur Elise, but after her death, she play the Sonata Pathetique on the ballroom and showing her emotions though the music because of her only sister's death.


Her student, Franzois, from a poor family who admire Akito after a concerto, pass away right before she wanted to teach him Bach's Minuet In G. Akito offering him for being his teacher and no payment. Of course Franzois is so happy. But she didn't know that Franzois is sick, and after two week studying with her, he pass away. Akito didn't want to come out from her room because she thinks she is a bad teacher. But Kenji cheer her up and finally she is back to normal.


Her teacher, Fujita, passed away and Akito didn't know that it has been a long time ago when she stay in Paris. When she came to Japan, she asked her friend where is he, but her friend only stares at her with sad eye. And so the others, they didn't tell Akito. And finally, her bestfriend, Asuka, tell her that Fujita-sensei has passed away because of his sickness. But he told her friends not to tell Akito of his sickness even if he die soon. Akito , being down again and she finally burst out her tears after long time she didn't cry. Fujita -sensei was always there for her, being her father because her father doesn't have any time for her. Since then, she always play Chopin's Etude, "Tristesse", means "Sadness". She play it almost everyday and everytime.

She became more suffering because of her cough, and her body is very weak now. She easily sick and she barely attended to orchestra practice. But there are a invitation for her, to play piano in a big concerto. It is her dream to play in a big concert. But Kenji told her not to attend that invitation before she cured. But she keep on her decision. Kenji knelt down on one knee in front of the sitting Akito in the park, and told her :


"I may hate you for some reasons, but i love you too for many reasons. Let me protect you. Let me be your side forever, even you didn't have any feelings towards me. Please, stay living, for me. Don't force yourself too hard. If you had more suffer, then im suffering. I promise i wont hurt you and protect you. If you have already cured, then i will make a big concerto, bigger than this, and you will be the main character. With our Orchestra. So please, don't force yourself. You're an evil if you force yourself, because you let me seeing you suffering."


Then Akito said that she will not attend that concerto.


But she can't help herself. She went to that Concerto alone without Kenji's knowing, and with a bad cough, she force herself.


When Kenji visited her, he didn't found her anywhere. Then he know where she going to. He runs from Akito's apartement to the Concerto place. And hoping that he didn't came late. 


And when he arrived with exhaustment, sweat, and panting, he sees Akito in the stage, with pale face, playing Chopin's "Tristesse.". And he sees her mother, father and her friends watching her with sad eyes. Then with a careful steps, Kenji step into the stage, took his violin and play along with her. Akito, shock at first but finally enjoy their duet even cough disturbed her. 


And when they playing the last song, "Valse L'adieu", Akito coughing blood in the last part and finally fainted. Kenji brought her to hospital and he is very panic at that time. 


When the doctor came out, he told Kenji that Akito is gone forever. Kenji's knees felt weak, he fell to the floor, and cover his face with his hand. Her mother crying uncontrolablely. Her father embraced his wife with sad and regret face. Her friends crying too in front of the hospital door.

Akito was gone, while playing "Valse L'adieu", who dedicated to her beloved people.



Akito Hiromasa



Keitaro Kenji


 PS : This is only my weird novel -_-v


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Naomira Hawkeye

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